雅思写作单句升级练习 13
📝 原句
The suggestion is weighted against average students.
这个建议对普通学生是不利的。
🔍 一、核心结构拆解
⭐ 核心句型
A be weighted against B
A 对 B 不利（经过权衡后的不利）
📌 结构分析
The suggestion = 主语（该建议）
is weighted = 被动结构（被权衡 / 被评估）
against average students = 介词短语（对普通学生不利）
📌 词汇说明
be weighted against
👉 表示：在分析、比较、评估之后得出的“不利结论”
✔ 语气比：
- be bad for（普通表达）
- disadvantage（中等）
- be weighted against（高级 + 理性分析感）
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🔄 二、词汇升级替换（雅思6.5 → 7+）
1️⃣ “The suggestion” 升级
this proposal
the policy
this measure
the recommendation
2️⃣ “average students” 升级
ordinary students
average learners
students with average ability
less academically advantaged students
3️⃣ “be weighted against” 升级表达
work against
be disadvantageous to
place…at a disadvantage
be biased against
📌 注
be weighted against ≈ be biased against（更强调“评估后结论”）
✨ 三、升级版本示范
✅ 6.5分表达
This suggestion is bad for average students.
✅ 7分表达
This proposal is disadvantageous to students with average ability.
✅ 7.5+ 学术表达
This policy appears to be weighted against students with average academic performance, placing them at a disadvantage.
🎯 四、写作扩展（变复杂句）
加原因
This policy is weighted against average students because it favors high achievers.
加结果
As a result, many ordinary learners may struggle to keep up.
加让步
Although the proposal aims to improve overall performance, it may be weighted against students with average ability.
🚀 五、可直接用于雅思大作文段落
Although the policy is intended to enhance educational standards, it may be weighted against students with average academic ability, thereby widening the achievement gap.
这句话可以直接放进：
- 教育公平类话题
- 教育政策讨论
- 精英教育 vs 普通教育
- 社会不平等类作文
