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雅思写作单句升级练习3

📝 原句

Some parents feel hemmed-in by their daily routines.
很多父母感觉被日常琐事所束缚。


🔍 一、核心结构拆解

⭐ 核心句型

A feel hemmed-in by B
A 感觉受到 B 的束缚 / 牵制


📌 结构分析

Some parents = 主语

feel = 系动词

hemmed-in = 过去分词作表语(被限制的、被束缚的)

by their daily routines = 介词短语表示原因/来源


🔄 二、词汇升级替换(雅思6.5 → 7+)

1️⃣ “Some parents” 升级

many working parents

a considerable number of parents

a growing proportion of families


2️⃣ “feel” 升级

tend to feel

often find themselves

report feeling


3️⃣ “hemmed-in” 升级

restricted

constrained

overwhelmed

trapped in


4️⃣ “daily routines” 升级

daily obligations

work and family commitments

monotonous schedules

household responsibilities


📌 注:

hemmed-in ≈ restricted / constrained
daily routines ≈ daily commitments / obligations


✨ 三、升级版本示范

✅ 6.5分表达

Many parents feel restricted by their daily responsibilities.


✅ 7分表达

A considerable number of working parents feel constrained by their work and family commitments.


✅ 7.5+ 学术表达

A growing proportion of parents report feeling overwhelmed by the constant demands of work and household obligations.


🎯 四、写作扩展(变复杂句)

① 加原因

Many working parents feel constrained due to increasing financial pressure.


② 加结果

As a result, they struggle to maintain a healthy work-life balance.


③ 加让步

Although stable employment ensures financial security, it often leaves parents feeling trapped in rigid daily schedules.


🚀 五、可直接用于雅思大作文段落

In modern society, a growing proportion of working parents report feeling overwhelmed by the constant demands of employment and family responsibilities, which makes it increasingly difficult to achieve a healthy work-life balance.


这句话可以直接放进:

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