📝 原句
Industrial particulates are mortally detrimental to one’s physique.
工业悬浮颗粒对人的身体有致命伤害。
🔍 一、核心结构拆解
⭐ 核心句型
A be mortally detrimental to B
A 对 B 有致命危害
📌 结构分析
Industrial particulates = 主语
are = 系动词
mortally detrimental = 表语（致命有害的）
to one’s physique = 介词短语作对象
🔄 二、词汇升级替换（雅思6.5→7+）
1️⃣ “Industrial particulates” 升级
industrial emissions
airborne pollutants
fine particulate matter
2️⃣ “mortally detrimental” 升级
extremely harmful
severely damaging
fatal to
pose a fatal threat to
3️⃣ “one’s physique” 升级
human health
physical well-being
public health
the human body
📌 注：
mortally detrimental = fatally harmful = pose a fatal threat
physique（偏书面）≈ physical health
✨ 三、升级版本示范
✅ 6.5分表达
Industrial pollution is extremely harmful to human health.
✅ 7分表达
Airborne pollutants are severely damaging to public health.
✅ 7.5+ 学术表达
A high concentration of fine particulate matter poses a fatal threat to human health.
🎯 四、写作扩展（变复杂句）
① 加原因
Industrial emissions can be mortally detrimental to residents due to long-term exposure.
② 加结果
Exposure to airborne pollutants may lead to serious respiratory diseases.
③ 加让步
Although industrial development boosts economic growth, it can pose a fatal threat to public health.
🚀 五、可直接用于雅思大作文段落
Environmental pollution has become a pressing concern, as prolonged exposure to industrial emissions poses a fatal threat to public health and undermines residents’ physical well-being.
这句话可以直接放进：
- 环境污染类话题
- 城市化发展类题目
- 经济发展 vs 环境保护讨论类作文
