从冗长到精炼——掌握非谓语让你的英语表达更地道
📖 一、什么是“句式浓缩”？
很多同学写英语作文时常出现这样的句子：
She finished her homework and then she went to bed.
虽然语法正确，但显得冗长。我们可以用非谓语结构浓缩为：
Finishing her homework, she went to bed.
✅ 意思相同，却更加自然简练。
💡 句式浓缩的三大核心方法：
1️⃣ 用现在分词（doing）表示同时或先后动作
- He walked out of the room and smiled. → Walking out of the room, he smiled.
表示“在……时，同时做某事”。
2️⃣ 用过去分词（done）表示被动或完成状态
- When it was finished, the work was sent to the client. → Finished, the work was sent to the client.
这种形式在学术写作中常见，让句子更简洁正式。
3️⃣ 用不定式（to do）表示目的或结果
- He went to the library because he wanted to study. → He went to the library to study.
目的更明确，表达更流畅。
单词差
30%
阅读完形
5%
语法
5%
听力
5%
口语写作
5%
单词好
90%
阅读完形
90%
语法
90%
听力
90%
口语写作
90%
🧩 二、浓缩句式时的注意点
- 非谓语结构的主语通常与主句主语一致；否则要加逻辑主语。
错误示例：❌ Running fast, the finish line was reached by him.
正确表达：✅ Running fast, he reached the finish line. - 避免过度使用浓缩句。一个段落中最好不要超过两次，否则显得“堆叠生硬”。
🧠 三、实战练习：句子改写
试试改写以下句子，使其更简洁：
- After he completed the task, he reported to the manager.
→ Completed the task, he reported to the manager. - Because she wanted to catch the bus, she ran quickly.
→ To catch the bus, she ran quickly. - When he entered the room, he noticed the light was off.
→ Entering the room, he noticed the light was off.
🌟 四、写作应用示例
原句：People who live in cities often face pressure from work and traffic.
浓缩后：Living in cities, people often face pressure from work and traffic.
👑 更自然、地道、书面化，是高分作文常见句型！
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