掌握段落逻辑,提升写作清晰度
📌 一、示范段落
A good paragraph is like a well-organized train. 🚆 Each sentence connects naturally to the next. For example:
“Firstly, online learning provides flexibility. Moreover, it allows students to learn at their own pace. As a result, more learners can balance study with work.”
👉 在这个段落中,每个句子紧密相连,使用了“firstly, moreover, as a result”等过渡词,逻辑性非常清晰。
✨ 二、核心过渡词
过渡词是逻辑的“胶水”。以下几类常用:
- 顺序关系:first, next, then, finally
- 因果关系:because, therefore, as a result, thus
- 转折关系:however, on the other hand, yet
- 举例关系:for example, such as, in particular
- 总结关系:in conclusion, to sum up, overall
⚡️ 三、写作技巧
- 主题句明确:每段开头提出主题,让读者一眼看出核心观点。
- 逻辑顺序清晰:先因后果,先总后分,避免跳跃。
- 过渡词自然嵌入:不要堆砌,应与句意融合。
- 句式多样:不要全用简单句,适当加入复合句提升层次感。

🚨 四、常见错误提醒
- ❌ 堆砌过渡词:例如一句话里同时出现“firstly, secondly, moreover”,会显得累赘。
- ❌ 逻辑跳跃:观点之间缺少衔接,让读者难以理解。
- ❌ 主题不突出:段落没有核心句,导致信息杂乱。
✍️ 五、练习任务
写一段约80词的小短文,主题为 The importance of teamwork. 要求:
- 开头一句为主题句
- 至少使用3个不同类型的过渡词
- 注意句子之间的逻辑衔接
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